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Tuesday 23 July 2013

FEATURE FILM SCENARIO #2




“WOMAN IN THREE PARTS” – SCENARIO  
{For private & restricted circulation}


IDEA: To take a close, sympathetic look at the origin, current status & future of Gender sensitive culture in an orthodox, upwardly mobile society   …   and then gently float it into the vast embrace of “Advait Vedanta” …

There has to be a woman. She will have to grow in the film. The film has to be about this woman. Yet she must turn into a metaphor. Three parts can be roughly divided as:

 Ossification
 Impression
 Immersion
 Coda

OSSIFICATION


This is happening in modern times. Like in any suburban house we see in Hindi t.v serials; a house with a lawn & verandah, uncles & aunts, other young & olds, including babies. She is one among all of these. The house leaves every one pretty much to them.

She has a boy friend, a young film maker. He’s got a powerful motor bike, real test driver’s helmets, even for pillion rider. He likes to play songs for her on his guitar in public parks, in other places he blows upon the harmonica that’s always in his jacket pocket. He likes to go fishing with a rod and baited hook, plays tennis & billiards. She is an air hostess, likes to party anywhere on off nights. They are on board a plane, accidentally. He is returning from a shoot, flirting openly with the lead girl. She comes to serve them. There ensues a subdued implosion within the aircraft. Other film crew, guys & girls, senior hostesses & flight attendant, even the Captain turns up for a toast as they are pronounced Man & Wife by a Christian Priest co-passenger on flight. This is known as ‘Janasakshi’ and restoration of peace. She gets ten days off for honeymoon during which they separate. She gives up her job as well. If there isn’t anything in it for her, she isn’t gonna take it.

An aunt in the house is a social activist. She, our leading lady, we call her Gimmi, is helped along to meet women’s groups who hate men. There Gimmi meets with a female partner called Squirrel. They start living together. While social work takes her further into public life, emotionally something seems to whither away somewhere deep within. She keeps pet cats that sleep with these women in the same bed. Her sensual nature oozes out in her professional dynamism. Her house is like a den and so is her car, but this sublimation is flawed; there is a vacuum somewhere. A void that is not to be filled with anything but the truth. What ‘truth’, she doesn’t think of all those things at all, but there is something missing, it is telling upon her health, every one can see that. The aunt runs a ‘gift your toys’ link with poor children and manages to secure a male child for Gimmi to ‘virtually adopt & support at a distance’ by means of checks paid monthly to a name; picture of this child she remembers seeing in the agency reference on Facebook. She has a link saved somewhere. She is at the top of her carrier. A comfortable plateau or caesura from her giddy, meteoric rise where physical time and personal space were on premium, now like in a time capsule she is shrouded in ennui & cloud computing.

IMPRESSIONS


Gimmi & Squirrel decide to jump in their car and wheel it to where their adopted child is situated. They look up a flight map like and hit the road with little other than a checking account book & a bottle of Bisleri. This journey by road opens up certain horizons for both G & S. There occur several incidents to give them ‘reality check’ and help them back to basics. After the glorious autobahn like speeds up to Pune they have to be slower on the route to Hyderabad.  First thing to break down is the a/c of their car. It is hot on Southern Plateau and they run out of gas at a meal stop on the road. As they struggle to start their car, G & S are hounded by little and large children constantly ogling at them, their curious eye-balls are plastered upon the flimsy clad, sweating bodies of these women. She is reminded, despite her best efforts to avoid, that Adoor, the child she adores could well be one such brash brat. Fact is that rural kids are totally shameless and inquisitive. A car driven by female, another female passenger to boot. This in itself is a sight for village children. Boys & girls alike, they stare them down to limits of embarrassment. Squirrel decides to quit. She has had enough. They have a show down and Squirrel catches a bus in opposite direction which had stopped to give them a helping hand. Gimmi is at a null point. After a caesura with local women who take her down to their village to dinner at their house, she steels herself for the onward drive. There are other things, new observations, experiences & situations that have made her act in certain ways she would never have dreamt of in her city based professional life. Tedium of solitary driving, coping with unknown languages and crude cultures, irregular eating habit and sleeping just anywhere to avoid falling asleep on the steering wheel while speeding on straight stretches of road on Deccan Plateau with its fantastically breathtaking molten lava honey droplet like rock formations, no trees, extreme weather; all these combine to give her a weary, far out contemplative look. She is discovering or being led by force of circumstance to feel for ‘the other’. And she finds it difficult and tedious to do so because, “what’s there in it for me?” she reasons.

The car for the most part has behaved. She has remembered to fill gas and have it serviced at Hyderabad, where she has had a most charming Muslim family sell her some of the most exquisite dresses imaginable called ‘shararas’ & ‘ghararas’. She feels like a princess in those softest of cotton textures and styles for summer. The road is now getting easier on her. She is really beginning to enjoy driving at high speeds. She goes up Nandi Hill for fun on hairpin bends. Once up there she is not able to take her self away from spell binding bird’s eye view, cloud formations, squeezing and funneling between lower down hill tops for days. She has never connected with time & space like this before. She finds herself staring at the clouds like those children stared at her. And who was that … yes, that black, monstrous looking Tamilian bus driver who said that, ‘the only true relation in this world is that of a Mother & Child’. He’d even addressed her as ‘Amma’ & she’d felt that he regarded her as one. At that moment it had irked her vanity to be called Amma. But in the South even little daughters are called Amma. This mind blowing journey is acquiring the form of a pilgrimage now for there is a strange look of determination on her face, such as we see only on pilgrims driven by some spiritual or fantastic zeal.

Gimmi is well on her way, she is approaching the East coast. The weather is mild. She can live off her car and not have to stay at hotels. She is losing her gender consciousness insidiously, not aware of it yet her self. Children’s staring does not trouble her at all any more, for instance. Somehow, or probably due to this loss of consciousness in her, children have actually ceased getting attracted to her vibrations. She tries to make efforts to be friendly with children she comes across. They do not speak the same language but connect in startlingly refreshing & creative ways. These children are something else again; she thinks fondly of Adoor and drives on.

 IMMERSION

The orphanage, she reaches late in the evening, housed in a French colonial building with a compound in Pondicherry. All along the drive way there are vegetables growing. It is a huge house, leaky during monsoons, damp & dilapidated. Here some twenty or more boys & girls live and share all their existential works and pleasures. There is a man who almost looks like and behaves like their mother. They call him ‘Mother with Moustache’. Gimmi is amazed at this strange family who are singing happily and serving their guest. The Man is silent for the most part, courteously enjoying how Gimmi soaks in details of their dense, emotional & sensual energy. This group or family knows nothing about her nor do they speak her language. The ‘Mother with Moustache’ speaks English haltingly, but he chooses his few words well. As the meal is done and over, current goes off. Children light up the place with candles or oil lamps. It is an amazing magical sight. She is handed one candle and shown to her room with the promise that her ‘child’ Venkatesh, will bring her coffee in the morning.

In her room, first thing that strikes Gimmi is the quality of silence here. Without electricity silence is darker, a deep roar of distant sea is filling it through huge French windows with no barriers. Sleep is impossible. She wants some coffee now. The whole house is dark. ‘Mother’ is walking up & down in silence, bare feet, upon the drive way. She still doesn’t know his name. He makes her coffee in his rooms. They have a silent conversation. Sitting there, Gimmi realizes, ‘…they are so coherent because they have practically defeated consumerism and abolished dependence on paper currency. They have found joy in elemental life and they are digging it…’

In his rooms, there is a charge, perception heightens with blazing aroma of freshly ground well roasted coffee. The roar of Sea seems to have become louder on the rear verandah, silence has deeper tones filled with sighs of worshipful joy; the tide is shifting; all fluids moving toward a cosmic orgasm. One adorable convenience being lesbian was you disregard contraception. So here, she conceives, tonight. Her pilgrimage is complete. She sees herself behind the wheel of her car, driving home with a benign smile of contentment. Soon to be a single parent.

CODA

Early the next morning, however, Adoor brings her a good tumbler of steaming coffee as promised. She is delighted to find that this is the same boy who’d come to town responding to her call for street directions to the Orphanage and now she recollects him being silently near her through out last evening. She hadn’t reacted to the vibe, that’s all. They have washed and cleaned her car. It is sparkling in early morning sunshine against the lovely period building with cabbages in foreground. Suddenly its time for taking pictures. She goes to town with children buying things they want or need or wish from a town, that is to say a market place. She finds a ticket to Bombay on a night flight the same day. In the evening they go to see her off at the airport; ‘Mother’ comes along as well. At the airport she tells him that they should keep her car and use it, she is tired of driving and that she will come back soon. Then they will need to use this car and hurriedly moves away from disbelieving eyes of children. There is eye contact with Mother, but no one goes inside the airport & all. The movie should end here. Unless there is some earth shaking idea forthcoming, this is it. -----------------------------------------------------------

Text prepared by Rahat Yusufi for CACA (pronounced kasa)
Creative Advancement of Cinematic Articulation.
© Author shall be pleased to see his I.P. Rights intact.


FEATURE FILM SCENARIO #1

“Ek FILM” AN ABRIDGED SCENARIO 

{For private & restricted circulation.}

IDEA: … and what should I feel?  

I am not to blame for what happened to him.

Just as you are not to blame for what has happened to me.
And nobody is to be blamed for anything   …
Because we are all beasts.


Ch#1 mother & child 

Piki, an adolescent boy, lives in his mountain village. He is perhaps an only child with his Mother or Grandmother we are not able to say as mountain women age so early in life. Mother loves Piki and she loves too, her hens & rooster, her vegetable patch & the photo of a man that sits in a sacred corner of the house among pictures of her Gods. The house she seems to love just as she loves to stand in front of it on the road and make conversation with passers by.

Piki is a quiet child. He loves nature, its cycles and so many changes that salubrious blossoming bodies of youth are to know. His bicycle, accidentally one day, kills a hen and the grief of Mother is undeniable. It is as though she lost her own child. That then, is precisely what happens. The same accident takes place again in precisely the same way; this time it is Piki who flies over the handlebar, hits his head on a stone and dies. The grief of Mother is exactly the same. Unable to see his situation clearly, Piki rebels and runs away from this home in the hills.

Mother keeps grieving and continues to live & love her elemental existence. Piki ends up working for his keep at a dhaba in Bombay. He will never see her again in this life, his unborn children would never know her. There are many young boys here who for an extra buck stage road accidents and among them Piki, lives by his wits; a day at a time.

Ch#2 bonhomie

Piki, the smart kid on the block, in Colaba. He represents no cast and comes from no creed, a nowhere man who the rest of hide-bound young society of Colaba looks agog at. In their dreams they would like to be like him but confronted, buckle to their knees at pinball machine and billiard table; he could even pull a card trick or two in dire straights. He’s got friends, some freakish painters & rich local kids; piki sleeps in a vacant loft or an empty studio and moves about among boys mainly. He could just as well sleep on the beach with a sky for cover. Piki is free because he’s got nothing to lose.

One night, after staging an astonishingly successful ‘accident’, Piki walks out of victim’s building, his pockets and a bag stuffed with bank notes. He notices that his dhaba boss, the cop & cabby are all looking elsewhere; & in that moment Piki turns away from them all with a silent good bye. Loaded with cash at Sarver’s Joint Piki comes across two other characters, paying up Sarvar for a boat ride to Abu Dhabi. Piki joins in with his money & the three take off, on an adventure of their life time.

Ch#3 comredare`

After a grueling voyage in the hold of a trawler these three, who really come from different universes, turn into good comrades; they come together with a single aim of making it good & fast. They realize that they have been cheated, that they have been dropped back on Indian soil further up North around marshy wastelands of the Gulf of Kutch. This misadventure binds them together even more strongly than before as each one’s survival now depends upon each other. There is little trust and mutual promises sound hollow. Nevertheless they hang together because there is pestilence around, the country is at war & communications have broken down. They have to stay away from cities and in the forest armies are conducting search & comb operations.

Ch#4 me & myself

Each one of them is separated from the others due to some greed, misadventure or difference of opinion; even then there are hopes and promises for each other when accidentally two of them meet after suffering horrible conditions of isolation, deprivation, hunger and mortal fear. Desperately they recount some of their deep fears and experiences and promise to help each other, knowing fully well they are trapped by commandos who are sure to shoot them down at sight, now any moment, their foot falls and cat calls are highly terrifying. The two slip into their personal, private, individual, own isolations, hiding away from each other in a desperate bid to survive. Piki actually witnesses his friend being burnt alive in the middle of a beautiful, olive green thicket in the forest. At last Piki is also caught but because he is totally unarmed and innocent, the Commanding Officer spares his life and couriers him back to Bombay on the next AN12.

Ch#5 self & the other

Piki looks groovy on the same old streets of Colaba. Now no one seems to recognize him any more. His hair & beard has grown; with a near death experience he looks more handsome than ever, actually with all that realization behind him, in his new dockyard uniform overalls, Piki walks along lit shop windows full of mannequins. Others pass by. The most miraculous chase sequence occurs  then through the streets of Colaba, this chase begins in taxis up to Victoria Terminus, then through empty, last train time platforms of VT the chase actually moves along the central line on local trains running on parallel tracks, Piki and his girl in one and the Cat chasing them in the other fast train overtaking steadily. In the end our hero and heroin, {newly found …the cause of this magnificent chase …} are the only occupants of an entire local train compartment which is where their new dawn comes as the train is docked for the end of shift. Our Heroin, then takes the Hero with his hand and they walk away, hand in hand on the receding line of perspective of Bombay-Lonavala train track, asymptotically … !!

Ch#6 married life & destruction

Piki now begets three children, count his wife, mother in law, himself; six, & now father in law is to arrive this evening to stay on after retirement; so seven souls live under this one room tin roof, a tenement of the stone quarry where every one goes to work. The only time they are together as a family is when they are resting during nights. Proximity makes them shameless and the old man peeps in to watch what’s going on with the couple. Children sleep with them on the same floor and the old lady is somewhere in the dark rear with a dripping tap, often loudly making her presence felt by dropping a steel vessel. There are so many different types of gaze intersecting each other in this tiny, darkened space & Piki is in top form. Staccato speech in such high strung quick tempo, hissing & flying. Here every one is for them selves. There is no controversy about that. The planes over head are too low and Piki just moves out to do susu when bombs begin to fall on this locality. Piki is once again witness to the utter destruction of his entire cosmology. It just burns up in direct hits and muffled agonized screams while he finishes piddling. Next morning he is among many survivors who do not know what to do. Everyone is shell shocked, bereft of their daily time table & schedules they really are at a loss to find any meaningful gesture or move to make.

Ch#7 recreation

This lazy, aimless crowd, Piki one among them, moves aimlessly toward the railway station where there is no train going any where and none arriving. No one is manning the ticket window. Some wiser folk, knowing the value of these stacks of paper card tickets start collecting them. Some start walking along the tracks. They form a sort of locality later, on a sort of no-man’s-land; in between warring & opposing yet invisible forces and their guard rooms & bunkers far off on top of the hills, exchanging friendly bombardments on either side. This is where most people from stone quarry settlement begin to re-recognize each other. Women begin to re-group and men try on different professional masks as they have lost features and props of their old ones; the settlement… gone now, family, businesses, middle-men-ship, petty shops. Piki has stopped speaking altogether. He merely makes some wondering or questioning sounds or gestures but he has no opinion on any thing any more, it would seem. Eventually, he does find it funny that a woman who is about to give birth to a child will not be helped by any other woman till this one tells as to who is the father of the child! So he goes in and helps her. There is an Aghori, hatha yogi who enjoys boiling and eating after-birth and placenta while the baby is cleaned and put to mother’s breast by Piki.

… and Time has moved on …

The people of this refugee camp have all gone away. No bunkers, no cross firing. There is a rivulet instead, streaming, gurgling down the hill side. A woman drying some diaphanous cloth on a line and a child splashes the back lit water, very clean. Piki sits burning holes in bamboo reeds. He talks with the child through notes of music that he can create on the flutes he makes. Piki plays flute interlude from the Beatle’s composition called “The Fool on the Hill”

ξηď şŧąġė  Ї.  Saturday, August 14, 2004.  11:53 PM

Ch#8 coda

Piki is walking up a steeply inclined pavement of Carmichæl road looking like a jumbo bouquet of colorful flutes. He is breathing steadily. Crisply uniformed in white & sky blue, children are returning from school. Piki does not play his flute to attract them; he is slightly out of breath. Children take no notice of him until; walking steadily up the incline with his tree of flutes upon his shoulder, putting one foot after the next it seems to him as though he has become motionless, instead it seems the Earth is moving away, not letting his forward step touch the ground. The ground just ahead is falling and there is no need to make any effort any more Piki felt / Piki feels light as a feather in a gust of cool breeze as gravitation slowly takes over and without him realizing it, Piki just keels over backward, his head hits a stone; he passes out & away among children scurrying round the body to make their way home. Some wise guys among them pick up a flute or two from his bouquet and mothers are screaming from higher floors. His companion & child would never know. They listen to sounds of flutes among bamboo reed forests surrounding their stream of sparkling water, juvenile sun shining on pale green grass and a sky, blue with fluffy white clouds who lazily tumble over.

Ψ text prepared by Rahat Yusufi for CACA (pronounced Kasa)  
Creative Advancement of Cinematic Articulation.

© Author would appreciate it if his I.P. Rights are respected.